The topic is good and the delivery was better than average . Brief, lacking specifics, but simply a taste of this important subject.
You said, “probably the most important issue facing Catholic men today.” Take a stand. If you believe it, say it. “the most important 'MORAL' issue facing Catholic men today.” One of the other important issues facing Catholic men today is that they are afraid of acting like men. Heaven knows there are few examples within the clergy (exceptions duly noted)